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Post by bankiga on Jun 26, 2008 4:43:47 GMT -5
Name: Gun Blaze Rank: S-rank Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Element: Katon Description: Developed by Bankiga, his most deadly technique which took him all his life to master. The user must be someone who has mastered the Katon element well. Releasing chakra from the body, the user then ignites it to create a temporary immolation over their body. This flame made is a searing hot 200 degrees C. This technique only has a time of ten seconds max for a S-ranked user until they are completely drained. This technique doubles their speed, increases their strength, and gives them temporary invulnerability to almost everything. The reason why the user is not brutally burned by his own jutsu is the fact they have worked purely with the Katon element all their life and have developed great immunity to burns and flames. After Effects:(Drawbacks) Only able to last 10 seconds max until the user becomes without chakra. Harms everyone around, including allies. Develops minor burning of the skin. The user if not having the specialized clothing that Bankiga wears, they will come out of the jutsu naked. Due to the amount of from the body it takes to keep the muscles in condition while going through this technique, the user is left severely dehydrated. Limit: The user must have only Katon as their affinity. They must be taught by Bankiga to learn this technique. Must be A-rank (5 seconds max for jutsu) or above.
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 26, 2008 16:54:04 GMT -5
screams god modding
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Post by onime on Jun 26, 2008 19:42:32 GMT -5
I'd like someone else to look at this technique.
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Post by Hotaru Tamazaki on Jun 26, 2008 19:47:53 GMT -5
Id like mods to be more helpfull then just scream god modding since that doesnt give a clue as to what to fix to make this a viable jutsu...
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Post by `''shiro`'' on Jun 26, 2008 21:20:48 GMT -5
{. basic argument
`. The only thing wrong I see with this technique is allowing the user to have a temperature of 300 degrees “Celsius” around a user and them not becoming burned from a drawback. The burns would not just be minor either, that would be like, their skin is completely ripping off, something you see happening when a nuclear bomb is exploding and peoples faces are just disintegrating off, so that’s why this technique is a bit powerful.
{. what would make this jutsu work?
`. Decrease the actual heat of the technique for it is completely too hot to deal with, I mean, I know this technique must be for a really high ranked ninja with only fire based jutsu and taijutsu techniques but still, people can’t control fire like that, fire is the hardest element to even control because of it’s harsh drawbacks. Give it more drawbacks, and just…..tune down the heat and then we’ll see.
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 26, 2008 21:23:28 GMT -5
Id like mods to be more helpfull then just scream god modding since that doesnt give a clue as to what to fix to make this a viable jutsu... Basic reasoning. The Body is not capabal of being at a tempature over 200 without instantly expierencing deadly side effects.
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Post by Hotaru Tamazaki on Jun 26, 2008 21:27:27 GMT -5
the way I would see this working is since its a fire jutsu.... the user pumps more heat into their body causing it to go under extreme conditions and forcing it to A. pump adrenaline, and B. causes the heart to pump faster delivering blood and oxygen to the muscles at alarming speeds increasing physical attributes.
Draw back from the rapid pumping of blood veins and arteries are strained and cardiac problems may ensue, also burns.
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 26, 2008 21:30:58 GMT -5
they would pass out before they could do this -_- It is Illogical and not likely to be approved, for that simple fact.
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Post by Sinda Kally on Jun 26, 2008 21:33:35 GMT -5
I know I shouldn't be posting here, so please don't warn me, but I just want to say this. I understand that these are ninja and all, but the human body isn't designed to cope with high temperatures. If you have a temp of more than 104, you have an 80% chance of dieing.
Human body, no matter how strong you are, is very sensetive to temp changes. If it drops a few degrees, you die from cold, if your temp goes up a few degrees, you overheat.
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 26, 2008 21:38:11 GMT -5
and thus, manipulating the body to where you can be at over 300 degrees - God Modding
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Post by Hotaru Tamazaki on Jun 26, 2008 21:41:21 GMT -5
I believe that alot we have seen on Naruto would clasify this as not too far from possible... maybe not 300, but 200 in my opinion is reasonable, and if you say thats god modding then I believe more then 75% of characters are god mod harris.
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Post by Sinda Kally on Jun 26, 2008 21:44:00 GMT -5
When I said 104, I meant Fahrenheit, not Celsius. Celsius is alot hotter than Fahrenheit. This doesn't seem reasonable to me.
Sorry Harris, Shiro, I'll not post here anymore...
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 26, 2008 21:51:48 GMT -5
I believe that alot we have seen on Naruto would clasify this as not too far from possible... maybe not 300, but 200 in my opinion is reasonable, and if you say thats god modding then I believe more then 75% of characters are god mod harris. I blame bad judment by Head Mods
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Post by bankiga on Jun 26, 2008 21:52:12 GMT -5
Fixed a bit... Moved to 200 and more drawbacks and limits. Explains reason for immunity against fire.
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 26, 2008 21:58:34 GMT -5
I'm gonna continue off my previous statement Basic reasoning. The Body is not capable of being at a temperature over 200 without instantly experiencing deadly side effects. At approximately 180, you begin to experience side effects, including drowsiness. the entire concept of this technique would leave the user parched of almost all water within their body, falling into a critical state from loss of water. However, an alternative would be manipulated water and fire at the same time, having the water be as a coat of armor
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Post by bankiga on Jun 26, 2008 22:03:58 GMT -5
Mm... How about.... No?.... Though I can put in dehydration seeing as it could leave the muscles without water...
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 26, 2008 22:09:26 GMT -5
It would dehydrate you to a nearly dead state
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Post by bankiga on Jun 27, 2008 2:50:37 GMT -5
Done...
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 27, 2008 14:52:20 GMT -5
The effects of such a technique would be suicidal, and by far, forbidden. However, if anyone else has any thing to say, please do
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Post by onime on Jun 28, 2008 5:32:02 GMT -5
It is S-rank... I wouldn't call it that much suicidal.. I'm planning on creating a explosive jutsu that wipes out everything in half a Kilometer soon. That shall be suicidal :'o
Though it is his most skilled trained technique. This is what makes him a Sannin ranked person, this exact jutsu is the thing that everyone that faces him shall dread the most. But in other words, this is one of his last resorts.
So yes, it is forbidden, but not exactly suicidal as long as you don't overuse it past the 10 seconds max, since any long and you shall die of chakra loss.
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