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Post by Sinda Kally on Jun 25, 2008 11:06:56 GMT -5
When I created the Hokage I was told to have 35-45 jutsu minimum, and I have only 38, so I intend to increase this to about 50, or more, provided the staff still agree with the minimum 35-45 jutsu. I've created, here, a number of techniques for Kally Sinda, the Hokage, that she has created, thus only she knows, but can tech to others if they meet the criteria to be able to learn the techniques, just like her other techniques. I am not the best with ranks, so if you think any of these are ranked improperly, please, let me know.
--- B-Rank ---
Name: Toudo Otashiana no Jutsu(Permafrost Pitfall) Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu Element: Earth, Ice Description: This technique creates a pitfall in the ground the becomes lined with frozen soil which may freeze the target to death if forgotten or not found for several days. The permafrost along the walls is chakra enforced, insuring that it doesn't melt. After Effects: The trap is set and covered to ensure a victim doesn't spot it before they fall in and if the user were to forget where it was located at, then they might fall for the trap as well. Even if this technique doesn't kill a target, if they fall in and are left, they may become sick and be placed into a hospital for a few days when found.
--- A-Rank ---
Name: Giragira Tenkyuugi no Jutsu(Dazzle Globe) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Lightning, Ice Description: A variation of one of Kally's other techniques using both lightning and Ice. First, after using the technique, Kally creates a large sphere of ice, up to fifteen feet in diameter. After this, Kally calls down lightning to strike down on the Globe directly, causing electricity to swirl about inside. The globe, from there on out, becomes very dangerous to be near for the electricity can, and will, jump from the globe to anyone too close to it and electrocute them, unless they take the necessary precautions. The globe also becomes somewhat fragile and will break under minimal stress, sending the electrical energy flying out in all directions, shocking, electrocuting, and potentially killing, many. After Effects: The globe continuously shrinks in warmer weather, causing the electrical power to dissipate quickly. The amount of stress needed to break the attack varies from the different globes from a simple flick to a minor earthquake, even to a strong breeze. The user, as well as the foe, are in danger if they get close to the attack, as well as any bystanders that approach too closely.
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Name: Naiwakusai Gojuunensai no Jutsu(Planetary Jubilee) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Water, Earth Description: This technique causes the earth beneath the feet of both the user and victim to creak and crack, opening a large ravine that engulfs unsuspecting foes, and the user if they've not jumped away from it by now. After the ravine have been created, water begins to surge through it at great speeds, slamming anyone in it into the rock walls at high speeds. The water calms down afterward and the ravine starts to cave in, send large rock falling down onto opponents. The technique, after this, closes up, sealing away anyone that couldn't escape it under ground. After Effects: This technique creates mass destruction if used in a town, no matter the size, engulfing houses and people alike, making this technique variable in use; For good or evil. Anyone can be caught in it, even the user.
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Name: Hie Arashi no Jutsu(Chilling Tirade) Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu Element: Ice, Wind Description: Summons up a snowstorm of catastrophic porpotions that covers the field in snow. This technique covers the field in up to fifteen feet of snow, taking some foes off guard. Provides the perfect area's for traps and pitfalls. Aside from covering the field in snow, there are strong winds that may topple trees or buildings in the area, flattening the surrounding area's if used with enough chakra. After Effects: After the attack, the Snow can melt if the area is too warm. The user, if not paying attention, may fall victim to one of their own traps or become buried in the snow. The winds are strong enough to thrown both user and victim to the ground or off of buildings, if used atop a building. If any surfaces stand against the wind, they may well become projectiles, dangerous to both friend and foe as they fly through the air.
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Name: Subarashii no Jutsu(Resplendence) Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu Element: Water, Earth, Wind, Lightning, Ice Description: A technique specific to Kally herself. During Here first year as a Genin, she wanted to explore herself, to see exactly how strong she was. It was during this time that she thought up this attack, though it never got finished until recently, only being used once during a training session. Kally does not have to form and seals to use this technique. The technique, upon use, releases pure chakra directly into Kally's muscles, increasing their capabilities. She then may move at increased speeds and punch much harder than ever before, possibly rivaling those using the gates. This is only the first stage of the attack.
After a short time, the technique then shifts to it's ninjutsu aspect. Her chakra system becomes flooded by her chakra, released in mass amounts. This preps her for a final attack. After a chain of seals here, she slams a hand, or foot, whichever by closer, into the ground. This is the contact point for the start of the technique, which causes a large earthquakes that will open up a ridge of earth. From this ridge, water flies into the air carrying hug boulders, controlled by Kally herself. After this, Kally directs the attack at her foe, but the attack is slow moving, allowing much room for error. If the attack lands successfully on her foe, the it freezes to them, holding them in place. Kally then performs a technique of her own design to call a powerful thunderstorm to the area. After that, Kally calls down a single strike of lightning, draining all of the electrical energy from the storm in the one attack, striking down onto the frozen in place foe.
Upon completetion, Kally is nearly fully drained of chakra, as it uses most of her chakra to use the attack. As well as this, for the second half of the attack, she is running on pure adrenaline. The taijutsu part of the attack, if she wasn't disarmed or beaten by her foe, causes high strain on both her muscles and her bones. After the adrenaline runs out, she will collapse from fatigue and exhaustion. If she doesn't get medical attention soon after this, it isn't very likely that she will survive for long.
After Effects: Heavily demanding on both the body and the user's reserves of chakra. Similar to Kakashi and prolonged use of the Sharingan, the User of this technique, upon use, may well end up in a hospital for up to a month in recovery. If the user is able to withstand the use of this attack, the Chakra reserves of the user will then be severely drained, not permitting another ninjutsu to be used in most cases. If any allies should come into the path of this attack and fall prey to it then there will be severe damage inflicted on many different levels. For both victim and user, this attack could very likely spell death.
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Post by Sinda Kally on Jun 25, 2008 12:19:11 GMT -5
As a note to anyone who reads these, I have them on there as using the special chakras(Lightning and Ice) with the basic ones, as well as together. This is because they are not combined, but used separately, not mixing together directly. The only technique that might be true in is the last one, which uses all of Kally's chakra proficiencies, making it exclusive to her.
If you can come up with a good reason why I gotta remove them, then I will not argue... But it has to be a good one...
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Post by Satoshi on Jun 25, 2008 12:19:31 GMT -5
I got a few problems and concerns with these techniques....
One three of them requires combining two or more Jutsu just to successfully pull off what you want to do.
Your Water + Earth doesn't make much sense since you need a source of water to pull off, and below the earth, there isn't much water.
Your "U" rank, needs to be changed to S, regardless... its kinda godmodish, and would definately cause trouble if its accepted. So sorry...
But I'll have to Deny these techniques.
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Post by Sinda Kally on Jun 25, 2008 16:26:06 GMT -5
Well, I am going to redo all of these. I'll have them posted again tomorrow, if I finish them.
They will be done before long.
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Post by Harris™ on Jun 25, 2008 18:20:23 GMT -5
Resplendence is way too powerful unapproved
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Post by Sinda Kally on Jun 25, 2008 19:33:29 GMT -5
Harris, did you not read that I said I was redoing them? None of these attacks will remain the same...
I will let you know when I need these attacks approved, at that time the techniques will be different.
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